tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6317808419889516476.post7915981065332990251..comments2024-03-08T23:13:59.239-08:00Comments on Follow the Muse: Work, work, workAmy Saiahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00346366018143891761noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6317808419889516476.post-33571376495903995082011-02-13T05:08:19.116-08:002011-02-13T05:08:19.116-08:00Thanks Talli : )Thanks Talli : )Amy Saiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00346366018143891761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6317808419889516476.post-14158630735853508782011-02-13T01:58:27.458-08:002011-02-13T01:58:27.458-08:00Duh, I'm an idiot. Anyway, take two: love the ...Duh, I'm an idiot. Anyway, take two: love the first line! :)Talli Rolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04780882465745107715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6317808419889516476.post-55036598326623797412011-02-12T18:29:31.047-08:002011-02-12T18:29:31.047-08:00MC- Haha, we have similar minds!
Nahno- Thanks ...MC- Haha, we have similar minds! <br /><br />Nahno- Thanks for the comments and advice. I really appreciate it. Sometimes it's hard to see certain things because we're too close to what we write. Thanks for taking the time to read it!Amy Saiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00346366018143891761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6317808419889516476.post-88884166221545374742011-02-12T14:22:30.975-08:002011-02-12T14:22:30.975-08:00Great first paragraph, witty and catches the reade...Great first paragraph, witty and catches the reader.<br />I'm not sure about the beginning of the second paragraph. It seems like you're just repeating what was already shown in the first paragraph. Also, the voice seems a little changed.<br />It goes back to the great voice again in the middle of the second paragraph. Maybe you just don't need to tell the reader so much?<br /><br />I hope this makes sense. Want to read more though.<br /><a href="http://nahnomclein.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow"><i> Nahno ∗ McLein</i> ™</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16548562702122142828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6317808419889516476.post-23153227067284855262011-02-12T14:03:44.698-08:002011-02-12T14:03:44.698-08:00Interesting. My current WIP is about a guy in lov...Interesting. My current WIP is about a guy in love with a nun. Not that there's anything wrong with it!<br /><br />Unless you don't want to burn in Hell. And he doesn't. Thus the dilemma.<br /><br />This is good stuff. Always interesting to read from the female perspective on dating.MC Howehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12135224394821535801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6317808419889516476.post-27208821570308599822011-02-12T10:18:45.607-08:002011-02-12T10:18:45.607-08:00I appreciate that Molly. Love you!I appreciate that Molly. Love you!Amy Saiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00346366018143891761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6317808419889516476.post-46816360289769406962011-02-12T08:20:15.811-08:002011-02-12T08:20:15.811-08:00Good old Thel! :0)lol. That was a good story Amy. ...Good old Thel! :0)lol. That was a good story Amy. All the very best with 'The Soul Seekers' A nail biting time for you - I'm wishing everything you wish yourself. xxMollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08604864977387798470noreply@blogger.com